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2010年3月6日雅思寫作G類書信范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)
You would like to work overseas, write a letter to a job agent company, tell it:
a) what job you would like to apply to
b) what companies are you looking for
c) why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir or Madam,
來(lái)源:www.examda.com I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Shanghai Daily for the position of overseas mechanical engineer on Mon. Feb.23.
I would like to apply for this post. I graduated with a Master’s degree in Machine-Building and Electronics Industries in Tsinghua University in 1999 and began my career in Zhongshan ABB Company as a young mechanical engineer. In 2006, I was promoted to be the chief engineer, taking charge of the projects in Southeast Asia. I have been seeking for chances overseas in my majored domain in the hope that I can develop my potential further.
If possible, I would like to choose a mechanical company with good reputation located in Chicago. I would also prefer small private companies which allow me to enjoy a larger space of promotion.
The reason I made the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.
I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.
Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Lucy Liu
專家點(diǎn)評(píng):
本次書信考察內(nèi)容為申請(qǐng)信,申請(qǐng)的內(nèi)容為工作。對(duì)于多數(shù)已經(jīng)有工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)的G類考生來(lái)說(shuō)比較簡(jiǎn)單。
在回答題目的過(guò)程中,考生需注意以下三點(diǎn):
1. 一定要將題目中所問(wèn)的問(wèn)題回答完整;
2. 編撰的細(xì)節(jié)要顯得真實(shí);
3. 由于是申請(qǐng)信,因此在用詞方面需要比較正式且有禮貌;
本次所選范文已經(jīng)完成了以上三點(diǎn)要求,在語(yǔ)匯使用上面也比較符合書信的要求,不失為一篇好的申請(qǐng)信類的范文。
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